REFLECTION ASSIGNMENT OF My California
1. Choose any 1 classmate that wrote about your same essays and briefly compare/contrast their choices and ideas versus what you said (eg "In my readings of these same authors I found that BLANK and my classmate also thought BLANK. An interesting point of view I didn't think of that my classmate said is BLANK")
2. Choose any 1 classmate that wrote about a different set of essays and tell us one thing you learned per author presented.
3. Like number 2, choose any 1 classmate that wrote about a set of essays that you didn't read.
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Choose any 1 classmate that wrote about your same essaysODE TO CALTRANS BY HECTOR TOBAR
Liz also wrote about group 2 essays. In Ode To Caltrans by Hector Tobar, I was reminded of the convenience aspect of the highways, Liz was reminded of the dangers of the highways. I had made a trip to Los Angeles just before our essay readings and I felt the same as the author did initially, that the highways are a great source of transportation. Liz had a friend who was dangerously close to having a highway car accident, so for Liz the essay was a reminder of how dangerous they can be. We both agree that while the highways are a great source of transportation they are also very dangerous as one slip up can cause a huge accident affecting many people.
MONTALVO, MYTHS, AND DREAMS BY THOMAS STEINBECK
I am a California native and I think that I take our mild climate for granted. While we both acknowledge that the climate in our area isn't exactly endless summers and warm beaches it is mild in comparison to many other states. Liz is not a California native and previously dreamed of California as a place of endless summers and mile long beaches.
THE LAST LITTLE BEACH TOWN BY EDWARD HUMES
Both Liz and I found the idea of living or visiting a quaint little beach town to be a novel idea and praised the thought of Seal Beach maintaining its small town feeling. However, it seems that Seal Beach may be losing that feeling.
SURFACING BY MATT WARSHAW
My classmate that I have contrasting ideas all-around on this essay. While I also didn't know that Santa Cruz was the first surfing locale, that was not what I wrote, so I don't know that counts as like ideas for this assignments purpose. I did see many contrasting ideas however. Liz was reminded of surfing itself. She has tried surfing before and so the story reminded her of her personal experience with surfing. The essay reminded me of all of the news stories I have heard throughout the years about the Maverick's Surfing Contest.
2. GROUP 1 ESSAYSFrom Sierra in the group 1 essays I learned about The Big Valley by Mark Arax, Transients in Paradise by Aimee Liu, Showing Off the Owens by T. Jefferson Parker, and The distant cataract about which we do not speak by Mary Mackey.
In the essay about The Big Valley, I learned that the author's grandfather owned a farm in California. His father attempted to open a bar. When the bar didn't take off he planted a garden as their family's "farm". He promised that subsequent years would be just as prosperous as the first, but he passed away. The author now plants a new plant every year in his father's honor.
Aimee Liu, who wrote the essay Transients In Paradise. She is writing about Beverly Hills. She thinks very little its residents according to the essay summary. There is a transient who sits in front of a deli and asks for money everyday. She also points out that Beverly Hills is a city that does not have a garbage dump, cemetery, or a hospital.
The essay Sowing Off the Owens is about a novelist from New York and a man who takes him fishing at the Owens River. They are both fishing enthusiasts. They go with a guide on their fishing trip to get away from LA and back to nature.
The distant cataract about which we do not speak by Mary Mackey is about her trips to the American River to observe the wildlife. The river is just a 5 minute drive from her and her husbands home, but they like to imagine they are far away from civilization while they are there. Mary observes the wildlife of the water at the American River. They are so close to the city that they can actually hear the sounds of the highway above them, but they imagine that they are far away from the city life. While at the river Mary and her husband see others using the river for religious ceremonies.
3. GROUP 3 ESSAYSFrom Jennifer I read group 3 essays Bienvendios a Newport Beach by Firoozeh Dumas, Cotton Candy Mirrors by Devorah Major, Berkley by Micheal Chabon, and California Honky-tonk by Kathi Kamen Goldmark.
Bienvendios a Newport Beach is about a man that moves from Whittier, CA to Newport Beach, CA. People in Whittier think he must be rich if he is moving to Newport Beach. In Whittier there are yards with old cars, tires, and other such things. His rental has the view of many fast food chain restaurants. When he moves to Newport the neighborhood has a HOA. Since there is a HOA, the yards of the new neighborhood are all clean and manicured. He has a neighborhood swimming pool that they take full advantage of. His parents still live in the Newport Beach home. This author seems to like the qualities of his Newport Beach home more than he did of his Whittier home.
Devorah Major wrote the essay Cotton Candy Mirrors about summer vacation. She writes about the days when the kids summer vacation was three solid months of being out from dawn until dusk. The kids would go to Playland. A carnival type place. It cost them 35 cents. They would always end up at the Fun House. It was full of mirrors and had little lighting. A wooden slide, and the barrel. Play Land has since been torn down.
Berkley by Michael Chabon is about his view of the city of Berkely, CA. He describes his city as being a city of different people, ideas, and professions. It seems like he must use some humor in his description of the city. In the end, Michael loves his city of Berkley despite all of its craziness.
Kathi Kamen Goldmark's essay California Honky-tonk is about a band called the El Rancho Motel. The band gets a gig at a bar. When they get there they realize that it is a biker bar, not what they were expecting. The musicians and the biker bar owner swap stories about different bars that they have been to. The summary that Jennifer wrote makes them seem like an eccentric group of people.